1. Common Sense “Resipiration” on Mos Def and Talib Kweli are Blackstar
Common is currently having fun, and myself and many others feel he has lost himself. He was one of the few rappers whose work got progressively internal, culminating with “Electric Circus”. That album had a musical continuity in ambiance, and in terms of music, it reached beyond the usually accepted rap templates. It is criticized and commended for that, and it is also sometimes deemed experimental by naive writers. Well, it certainly is experimental if you look at it historically within rap music, but musically it is a sign that Common was growing into a serious being, choosing to not be tainted by the governing hedonistic mentality of rap music, and seeing himself as part of a larger musical whole.
It didn’t last too long unfortunately. It ended precisely when he met Kanye West. Kanye is a master at crafting a harmonious hip hop sound that has a universal musicality to it. That’s why he crosses over, and he is probably the most musically accomplished rap artist in pop music currently. His rapping is something along the same lines, musical, outgoing, and convivial.
But Common as a rapper is the opposite. His strength is his writing. So his rhythm is not as musical as Kanye’s. He is rigid, rapid, and that gives him a quick, short breath, rhythm. He sometimes compensates for the lack of musicality in delivery by writing multysilabic rhymes (see “Ressurection”). But predominantly, you went to him because he was one of the few to whom writing was a problem, something that had to be solved with intelligence.
But listening to “Be” (which was produced by Kanye), you can only hear a man keeping up. He is literally keeping up with the beat, keeping up with the general hedonistic attitude, keeping up with the times. He is suddenly Madonna, and lost, for now.
But I want to go back to something good. This following verse matters because almost no other rapper (maybe Sage Francis) has a writerly mind as intricate as his–with good understanding of poetic allusions and how to use that to punctuate the rap verse. He repeatedly wrote this kind of quality material throughout the late nineties, and even had a modest hit song with ‘Remindin’ Me of Sef’. That was a song about celebrating, which made it seem like it was about partying, but it celebrated death, life, and loss, mostly through a series of internal recalled personal rememberances. It is sweet in what it is, personal, and significant because rap has so few designs which graze the essential soul of all art.
But really, back to this. It is about returning to a city and entering it through the funeral of a friend, going back home, but to death, to a sad state. The return home is equalled to the return into self, but a deeper self, with alarming observations, and the feeling of an overpowering helplesness. Listen here, verse starts at 3:59
Yo…on The Amen corner I stood lookin at my former hood
Felt his spirit in the wind, knew my friend was gone for good
Threw dirt on the casket, the hurt, I couldn’t mask it
Mixin down emotions, struggle I hadn’t mastered
I coreograph seven steps to heaven[1]
And hell, waiting to exhale and make the bread leavened
Veteran of a cold war[2] It’s Chica-I-go for
What I know or, what’s known
So some days I take the bus home, just to touch home
From the crib I spend months gone
Sat by the window with a clutched dome listenin to shorties cuss long
Young girls with weak minds, but they butt strong
Tried to call, or at least beep the Lord, but didn’t have a touch-tone
It’s a dog-eat-dog world, you gotta mush on
Some of this land I must own
Outta the city, they want us gone
Tearin down the ‘jects creatin plush homes
My circumstance is between Cabrini[3] and Love Jones [4]
Surrounded by hate, yet I love home
Ask my God how he thought travellin the world sound
Found it hard to imagine he hadn’t been past downtown
It’s deep, I heard the city breathe in its sleep
A reality I touch, but for me it’s hard to keep
Deep, I heard my man breathe in his sleep
A reality I touch, but for me it’s hard to keep
[1] Miles Davis’ Seven Steps to Heaven, a play on words generating an image of helplesness (?)
[2] Another play on words (how can one be a veteran of a war that had no direct military engagement?), another image of helplesness, futility.
[3] Cabrini is a housings project in Chicago that was neglected by the city and torn down. More info.
[4] The movie, about the romance between a Chicago poet and a photographer.
2. Jay-Z “Snoopy Track” on Life and Times of S.Carter Vol.3
It is the nature of rap songs that each verse can be singled out, the unified nature of the song is generally broad, specially when it comes to this type of songs conceived as placeholders for ‘braggin’ rhymes.
In this one, the bragging is about the fulfillment of sexual desire: the constancy of female presence, and this constancy as a value of pride and credibility. The creativity is in giving the impression of a seemingly respectful stance towards women, annotated by a luxurious care towards them. Polygamy is thrown in there at the end in a particularly creative line that relies on the strong contrast of having “a main chick, a mistress, and a young bitch”, of course the sleight of hand is the assonance.
This is for my chicks that get dough for takin off they clothes
All them money makin honeys that slide down the poles
All my educated chicks whose grade is 4.0
All the baby mamas across the globe; ayo!
I like my women friends feminine
I like my hoes on “X” like Eminem
I like em bow-legged, never coke-headed
With a dough fetish, the drive to go get it
I like they toes proper, I like they clothes Prada
I like they shoes Gucci, I like new coochie
I fucked a few groupies, in a few hoopties
I got em iceberg shit they thought I knew Snoopy [1]
I cop them Roc-a-Wear, my mamis dedicated
They never tell me no, the most they said is “not here”
I got they ears studded, both wrists baguetted [2]
I got a main chick, a mistress, and a young bitch
Forget it I’m the Don [3]
[1] This is a reference to clothing line Iceberg which bears Snoopy the Peanuts character on its sweaters)
[2] Something often done in rap, using a noun as a verb. For instance, “to wear ice” with ‘ice’ meaning diamond jewlery, could be worded as “I got iced (or iced-down)”.
[3] The creativity here is in the nonchanlance detectable in the inflection…The skill in rap is also in conveying personality through attitude. A lot of skills are judged on the dynamics between what the words intend and how it is conveyed through the enunciation.
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